First of all .. i am really dense abt poetry .. i have no idea how it is supposed to be written .. this is my first attempt at writing a poem and yeah .. dont judge my english grammer based on this, itss actually worse than this .. ;) ..
Deep sea, warm sunshine and the beautiful dove,
This is a song about the girl I love.
I always forget my sense of duty,
for I am mesmerized by her beauty.
Gone is the wish for the king’s crown,
When I look into her eyes so brown.
Meadows and pastures don’t seem so nice,
Whenever, wherever I get lost in her eyes.
I would scale any mountain’s peak,
Just to get a glimpse of her rosy cheek.
I see the moon, it has lost its flair,
My girl’s skin, Oh! Its so fair.
Round the world, I would make trips,
Just to kiss her lovely lips.
I keep staring at empty space,
But all I see is her beautiful face.
When she is with me, I lose track of time,
The world around me, its just a mime.
Roses, diamonds, gold and fur,
What would I not give to spend time with her.
I feel as if I am walking on tar,
Oh my girl ! she is so far.
I know that we have been far apart,
One day my dear, I shall win your heart.
Oho!! Poetry and all Gga? You must really be in louwe!! Nice :)
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ReplyDeleteReal sweet one.. Lucky girl ;)
ReplyDeleteReally nice GGaa..... Who is the girl by the way..??
ReplyDelete-anusha
sw-ee-ee-eet!=)
ReplyDeleteYou turn poet?! Who be the girl ? :P
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